All Comments on 'Fly-Half'

Love the imagery and metaphor that unfolds. Mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

It has vivid metaphors; your words make it such a clear little story. And the ending is sudden and surprising. Great writing! :-)

Bruises and the drift of memories<br>

seared by the hormones of fleshy proximity<br>

the long sweet hours of obsession<br>

stretch in all directions<br>

wrapping into your life<br>

from the focus of the poem<br><br>

Agree with Angeline, so used to standard fare here that ending really was a surprise, had to read it twice. A stand-out.