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All Comments on 'For A Tall And Skinny Woman'

by JCSTREET

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
my

tendon and muscle, clavicle to elbow

burned when I read this poem

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
I wonder who. . .

. . . lives in Evanston?

Some wonderful phrasing:

"brightling fell of night"

and the enjambment

greatly enhances

the poem's strength.

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