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by f-cynyr

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AngelineAngelinealmost 17 years ago
Lovely!

You move through your lines so nimbly--reading this poem is like watching an intricate dance performed.

champagne1982champagne1982almost 17 years ago
Textural

Unobtrusive word play throughout this poem adds a gentle prod into new sensations as we explore the wonder with this poet. This poem mentioned on the New Poems Review thread in the PF&D forum. f-cynyr, thanks for giving us the chance to read and enjoy, Carrie.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Blue does seem

to visit the many these points in time..I offer my humblue

heart on sleeve sighing in awe..dreaming of "theblue" too!

blue

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i have slowed my postings here at lite, for a number of reasons, but i still post regularly on my poetry blog. if you wish to read more of my poetry, please go to http://f-cynyr.blogspot.com/ and https://boundtome.blogspot.com/ thank you.