All Comments on 'For Ranse'

This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>

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Your imagery is strong and graceful, and you have a nice balance between the concrete and the abstract here. One tiny stylistic quibble, one that may be mine alone: I find the capitalization of each line a bit distracting; I think your lines would flow even better without it. Just a thought. Nice work, truly.