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Click hereShe simply appeared on the computer screen
with a word
an avatar.
But, I swear I could feel her face against my pussy.
One breath
another.
Warm against my clit
before she stretched out her tongue
swept the wetness from my hole
sending a searing torch to my nipples.
Her mouth
spilling saliva across my lips
suckling
sipping me to life.
Then she appeared to me in flesh
and I knew more than Romeo or Juliet
I knew the secret key of Eden
as we breathed each other.
She spread her thighs
I stretched inside, slipped within the warm pool
of her pussy and spread my hand
ripples
breezing into her pond
she moaned and sighed
and thrust her hips
enslaving my wrist
as I swirled my fingers
and a fountain sprung
emulsion and surrender
to life
for one another
our breath.
Like water splashed on sauna rocks!
Pool, pond, a fountain sprung; what wonderful images of sexual response. Thanks, CharleyH, for this vision! I'm not sure about the torch image; do you send one, or apply one?
Ok, that was a bit too hot for a Sunday tea-time, but I'm not really complaining.
VERY vivid and delicious!
Lou
xxx
and WET. My imagination got lost in all the wetness. My favorite lines:
as i swirled my fingers
and a fountain sprung
The simplicity of feelings well put to words is amazing. Wonderful poem. Very erotic.
mismused
Ripples don't quite cut it, Charley. I was on a tidal wave. Very nice! (And then some.) :o
~lucky
That leaves little to the imagination, not to mention...yeow!!!
I'm a little flustered now. Okay, I'm all excited now.
I'll say no more.*wink*
Bravo babe.