All Comments on 'Forbidden Fruit'

sensual, and insightful. i always enjoy your poetry.

very good over all...

I did think that it should have been suck its juice: instead of suck it juice...

but that could be nothing more than a small typo...they point was great, and the meaning still cared through regardlessly so I gave it a 5!

,with crisp images, and an insight, wonderful.

A nice tight write with disciplined rhyming.

The fruit is very tempting, as your voice is seductive. I love your persuasive poetry.

even coming back to this poem, it's still one of the most sensual, evocative poems here at tile..

lovely sister--u r my fav