All Comments on 'Foreign'

...it was that god-awful patchouli that did it do me! Thanks for the reflection of my memory.

I love the opening verse, and some strong image lines abound throughout. I did wonder, however, if the poem might still work without the last two lines.

...I'm in awe of this poet's mastery. Great imagery and ambience.

No therm zone

I like this one, a lot, but a couple things bug me, first, this line is in my opinion, a hinderance---though my nose found it weeks ago.

and the last two lines, ""...and what would it mean?"" I think this line is unnecessary, dont ask me what it means, show me, you tell that its a map, let me feel the bumps in the road, please dont assume that i know where they are:rose:

I have truly enjoyed all your poems so far, this is also very good :)

I have also enjoyed your poetry-- this one delves into that understanding we have of the science around us, the understanding buried so deep that we cannot explain.

well done

I want hot apples

thank you

Haunting and seductive imagery {and scents, perhaps?}.

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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You are an artist, painting vivid scenes in the mind of the reader. Keep it up.