All Comments on 'Fragments'

by Sander Roscoe Wolff

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
Yes

This is your best today. Love it.

duckiesmutduckiesmutabout 19 years ago
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This is a very striking image:

It burns away the remnants of complacency,

Dissolves the I, until the powdered ash is laid,

Like a shroud, over everything.

Very well done.

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