All Comments on 'Friends Who Dance'

Wasn't sure at first and the typos let it down, but I can hear this as a Rap and particularly like the last stanza. Much in advance of the usual dirty ditty. Thanks for the read.

it does come off as a bit of a rap to me as well, but only in the initial block. Afterwards is a well maintained rhythm. I don't really see a relationship between the title and the story.