All Comments on 'Frost'

In time, a person comes to treasure the ice dam holding back the water. If it is frozen, at least it can get no worse; if it doesn't move, maybe it can be ignored. Life, though, is movement, isn't it? Even though we build the dam ourselves, we need help to thaw it.

Freezing your emotions to hide them in your belly is a barren strategy, for what has the power to unlock but love? To maintain it is to deny love. Beautiful and evocative (but mixed as to metaphor, I think-- by the title, mostly).

a well restrained look into the power of love and passion. Excellent work...

k.

enchanting poem, thanks for the journey..Art~

a poem to unthaw the coldest forms.

and hot. Well done, Dar.

Flyguy

You're saying so much in just a few words. You jab your point in like a hot poker. Any who read it will have no choice but to melt...

Just what I needed to read.....

~honey

The desperation of desire breaks easily through the frost. Love ya, Dar. Keep up the good work! ~Minx