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A sexual daydream ~ reinforced into remembrance

I wonder, if I wait, will anybody get it? Well, perhaps some of the real poets here might. Okay, first, an interesting interplay between two people as they dry hump; interesting descriptions. Second, it might make it easier if you italicized one person's thoughts, to make it clear to the reader that two people are engaged in this piece. As always, all you write is so very fascinating.

The descriptions were wonderful, but I felt it was lacking clarity. (did he dismount from a horse). Shouldn't the last three verses have been the beginning and the first three verses the end?. I got the impression that she masturbated him.