by Loansum
Do not read much of the poems on Lit. But will have to change that. Really enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work
I don't need your permission, do I? You know that when I posted this you were incredibly aroused and ashamed. You still are. But that's exactly what you crave, Fuck Thing.
You did it, i didn't think You would post this here, i thought this was private between the two of us!!!!!!
I think this does an amazing job of describing her need to submit while alluding to her conflict when she gives in to those needs. It is also very erotic too. I would love to get a crack at this Fuck Thing.
did you really grind it in
by reading it to her twice
i did like the way you carefully avoided the squirm/sperm rhyme
that was the high point
i didn't vote
This poem is very effective in addressing the needs of the submissive and (dominant) readers.