All Comments on 'Fucking the Paper with a Pen'

though I think it is a little uneven in parts. Some of the line breaks seem to make the poem read in a very choppy fashion (S3 in particular) and I am never a fan of lack of capitalization, though that's merely a stylistic quibble. The close is quite good, I think. Good job.

Recommended in today's New Poems reviews.

I enjoyed this metaphor.

you could lose the line "with any luck".

There are a few other places you have a few extra words and it draws away from the poem that is strong work.

I thought I had read you before, I guess not. Been missing out!

good work

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'Oh, and all those creative urges which tickle and tackle you at day and at night (and that humor too), those I shall call sublimations', said the professor and rested from his work.