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All Comments on 'Fuel Your Dreams'

by hopelesslydevotedjps

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 10 years ago

Nice erotic poem without the usual ooh Baby, Baby four letter words. Liked the last 2 lines, although I would not have separated them with a period. I thought they should flow together as one.

I enjoyed the poem.

pelegrinopelegrinoabout 10 years ago

Very nice romantic atmosphere you created. Quite sensual too!

5-ed

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