All Comments on 'Full Contact Crochet'

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Safe_BetSafe_Betover 15 years ago
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Very excellent read. Got a wonderful erotoc feeling from this poece, however my favorite lines were "Until I drowned in summer; And the nagging of past winters; Melted me." Love those lines!

Maria2394Maria2394over 15 years ago
excellent erotica

without being trashy and using all those words I hate to see overused in "erotica."

YOU have a good grasp of feelings and feeling. I have enjoyed your work, keep it up, I will be reading!!!

maria

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
good lord,

that's a phenomenal piece. Your work in general is amazingly solid, but this one caught my eye, partly because of the great title. Well done!

sassynycsassynycover 15 years ago
jackpot!

this is one of those poems that pulls you into the moment, and places you right there, in the room. i felt completely voyeuristic, while reading this. thanks for the peek. ;)

i'll be keeping my eyes peeled.

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