by AuthorityGriffith
Very excellent read. Got a wonderful erotoc feeling from this poece, however my favorite lines were "Until I drowned in summer; And the nagging of past winters; Melted me." Love those lines!
without being trashy and using all those words I hate to see overused in "erotica."
YOU have a good grasp of feelings and feeling. I have enjoyed your work, keep it up, I will be reading!!!
maria
that's a phenomenal piece. Your work in general is amazingly solid, but this one caught my eye, partly because of the great title. Well done!
this is one of those poems that pulls you into the moment, and places you right there, in the room. i felt completely voyeuristic, while reading this. thanks for the peek. ;)
i'll be keeping my eyes peeled.