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theoncomingstormtheoncomingstormover 10 years agoAuthor

Todski- I'm always happy to hear how to improve my work. What lines did you think I could change?

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
haha

I can totally relate...except for my feet, my feet are huge.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Liked it

Made me smile. I'd take it, Lil' Bit!

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
Cheeky and cute

So much happening upstairs you suit your namesake. A few lines That I could maybe suggest changes on but this is bubbly and happy :-p

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