All Comments on 'Future Dreams'

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TeeTeeTeeTeeover 17 years ago
Bend

baby bend! Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.

TT

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailover 17 years ago
Needs a little

Here is your very low:

Strip naked and bear my soul,

A sad line, used too many times, and how can it be bear, when I don't see any fur? (bare)

But,

points for consistency.

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