by annaswirls
Fantastic form...and wonderful how something so concisely written can actually make you think from the perspective of a brick wall. Great :)
This is wonderful I am using it as a study piece to try and get mine right!
I thought this was an excellent combination of the form and trigger.
It was much more thought provoking than I would have imagined someone could get with this combination.
you took me back to my +home+....my garden. I miss it,so much
loved your poem, BTW
xox
~m