All Comments on 'Genevieve'

by greenmountaineer

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pelegrinopelegrinoalmost 10 years ago

I don’t know to which particular "Genovefa" you refer to, GM, so, please excuse my ignorance, but your poem is a brilliant binary form piece with marvelous rhythm and strong rhyme and near rhyme. The transition from Genevieve to the narrator and the contrast and similarities between them are striking and perfectly balanced.

Just beautiful!

5ed.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
5ed

hey didn't I see her above?

As once pled she, so now I plead

inverted syntax highly justified here, says I

sonically very nice.

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