All Comments on 'Get Me a Sunset'

by foehn2

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ghost_girlghost_girlover 16 years ago
beautiful!

I loved it, Foehn. The picture is lovely as well.

I have a nit-pick though. The word "little" ...is it really needed? read it without that word.

my favorite lines are--

if the shuddering sun is not too tense,

I’d also like to hear the wings of owls.

That is beyond beautiful. Loved it, thanks for posting!

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Burned by the sun

Great combo. All the senses are triggered. and what a photo! Here the photo and words worked perfectly together (on the imagination). More yes?

ghost_girlghost_girlover 16 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in this thread :) thanks for sharing!

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=24416985#post24416985

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Kiss the desert sky gooodbye

That is to deep for most of us.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
ON MISSING HOME

from a lonely traveler. TK U MLJ LV NV

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