by foehn2
I loved it, Foehn. The picture is lovely as well.
I have a nit-pick though. The word "little" ...is it really needed? read it without that word.
my favorite lines are--
if the shuddering sun is not too tense,
I’d also like to hear the wings of owls.
That is beyond beautiful. Loved it, thanks for posting!
Great combo. All the senses are triggered. and what a photo! Here the photo and words worked perfectly together (on the imagination). More yes?
has been mentioned in this thread :) thanks for sharing!
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=24416985#post24416985