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All Comments on 'Get Out of My Way'
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jthserraabout 20 years agoA powerful explosion
of emotion. I liked the repetition, but the wording felt a little rough in areas. Read it outloud and adjust where it feels a little off. Otherwise, powerful stuff.
jim : )
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