Grains of Sand

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Did you go to the beach when you were young?
          Yes, we went to Cape Cod every summer
Do you remember ever looking at the tiny grains of sand?
          Mmmm.  I would pretend that some were little diamonds
Did you ever wonder how many grains of sand there could be on that beach?
          No, I would think about sand castles and seaweed flags and moats
Try to imagine it now, sweetheart
          Okay, well ... It's inconceivable
I love you more than all the grains of sand...

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years agoAuthor
Lol Twelveoone

No scientist, that's for sure. Yep kind of schmaltzy. Hallmark? maybe. I think I am just a sentimental completely hopeless 60 plus teenaged hopeless romantic.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
you can look at this two ways OB63

as a chemist

a load of silicon dioxide

as a poet

Hallmark

either way

nice sendiment

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
The stanzas

Look like gentle waves washing in and out, splashing you love on the sand at her feet

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Your love doth overflow her bucket, Oldbear.

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