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by Oldbear63

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Your love doth overflow her bucket, Oldbear.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
The stanzas

Look like gentle waves washing in and out, splashing you love on the sand at her feet

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
you can look at this two ways OB63

as a chemist

a load of silicon dioxide

as a poet

Hallmark

either way

nice sendiment

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years agoAuthor
Lol Twelveoone

No scientist, that's for sure. Yep kind of schmaltzy. Hallmark? maybe. I think I am just a sentimental completely hopeless 60 plus teenaged hopeless romantic.

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