- Erotic Poetry
- Gravity Sucks
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nuances taste mementos
my lips your tongue
specialty blend
feet above floor
your strength uplifting
never release
gravitational memo
perpetual status earthbound
looking upward
- COMMENTS
MyNecroticSnailalmost 18 years agoit could be better organized with transitional (transactional) words to reduce the choppiness
never release (this, my, your)
gravitational memo
"specialty blend" seems to be a line that takes away from the gravity of the moment
My Erotic Trailalmost 18 years agoI like haiku and this, although it may not have been intentional, felt like three haiku poems that flowed downward, which we all know is the Art of gravity <grin
