All Comments on 'Gravity Sucks'

I like haiku and this, although it may not have been intentional, felt like three haiku poems that flowed downward, which we all know is the Art of gravity <grin

it could be better organized with transitional (transactional) words to reduce the choppiness

never release (this, my, your)

gravitational memo

"specialty blend" seems to be a line that takes away from the gravity of the moment

Nuanced well this tale with 3 haiku-like strophes.