All Comments on 'Green Scream of a Dream'

nutured by the heart of a dove...really beautiful Du...your writing makes on pause and pray for hope...and serenity in these times of turmoil...let your ink flow into the river of the deep rich soil...bluer....

Those first 3 lines say it all;

the rest is mere enrichment.

you are the poet goddess <grin> your talents amaze me. As well as your wisdom of the Snow Owl <grin> this poem was a mix of nature, zen, mystique, Du Lac sprinkled spice and charm...thanks Du for all that you Du for sharing your talented writes and for helping us here at this site (~_*)

i write sometimes of the same... the inability of us to see the small things in life, even though they are all small. I thought the ending could use a bit of editing though, it kind of left me wanting more. You are inspiring in your writes and awesome elsewhere!!!

QP

I liked the "green scream of a dream". This deserves an "E"!!

I am speachless Lady ~!!

I love the whole poem ~!!!

Great imagery, flow and what a Beautifullllll trip,

you have taken us all on. Your words took me away. Thank you for the peaceful lil trip to FairyVille~

More More More Please ~!!!

such shameful glow, when outshined by your words, this was truly awespiring.... and left me awestruck. very magical and talented creation of soul, -sGp-

This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 40,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>

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