All Comments on 'Half a Dozen Little Thoughts'

Any one of them could stand on it's own - or be expanded upon. The panel saw and the rows of grout are perfect. Were these thoughts you had jotted down to work with?

Not little on depth, not little on intellect... only little in words. Now I'm off to have at least a baker's dozen of little thoughts on your thoughts.

Inner Vision : i suspect U possess it , Tod !

Really love reading your thoughts and expressions, thank you for sharing them. I agree that any of these could stand alone. But I enjoyed the full sequence as well, they all stirred up a similar feel. Love the last lines btw!

Holy crap. Those are great, Tod!

Ok, to make this useful. On the fourth one, the imperfection/perfection lines don't quite work for me. And "there it lays" — what lays? Imperfection, itself? A jagged white square? I feel you were going for a metaphor, but dropped the noun for some reason.

Wonderful line-work here.