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by mamaval2930

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I Didn't Like

I didn't like the lover. He should never leave her. He should stay and marry her and keep her safe and protected and in his arms. I know reality is what it is. But I know I want the lover to stay. Great write, Mamaval. Keep going. Little more rhythm would be nice. But overall this poem RAWKED!

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

"Logic plays no part/when hearts belong" my favorite line, really connects with me.

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Conservative and professional by day, vixen by secret. I write both romantic stories, as well as erotica. My goal is to bring pleasure to people with my writing.