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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
5

Heaven & Hell, I adore you

burn me another soul on the barbeque

Heaven & Hell, you bore me

I've got to know this place too well

Well

5 for the inspiration

MagnetronMagnetronalmost 10 years ago

Not really sure what the rain is all about and how it factors in .....

"This rain tears open, all our wounds"

...... but otherwise this is one of your best writes that I've read so far.

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