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Desejoalmost 13 years agoAngel food cake and scones
Love this. It made me think, I love the word play, the references..and to top it all off, it made me imagine the whole scene. Very well done.
UnderYourSpellalmost 13 years ago~
Enjoyed this. A few nit picks .... 'bottom lip' doesn't need a hyphen and it would flow better if every line didn't start with a capital letter
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