All Comments on 'Holding my breath'

... to my emotional home. Very well done. Thanks! ~Imp

was breath taking in its pondering about the purposes of life, during times when we view it as nothing more than an automatic function. Very thought provoking!

this poem was mentioned on the thread "new Poems Reviews"

Found this an outstanding

piece of poetry, a piece

filled with metaphors and

accurate discriptions of

pain felt through love.

I felt this poem and it was

a pleasure to read.

Thank you

~ J

that for reasons other than to sustain life do we breathe and that type of breathing - for another - is as vital to staying alive as the unconscious reflex one. You effectively expressed throughout this piece the overwhelming loss of love felt as I, too, held My breath with you. Thank you for this powerfully penned work.

Vixxx