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A fabulous piece! 5 star all the way! Good work!

you tapped into one of those shared-with-most-readers experiences... the smell released as the first rain hits the overheated ground. a poem that manages to embrace the reader this way is already halfway home.

not the best i've read by a long shot, but a pleasurable few moments' read nonetheless. ty

best of the three because you tried capturing a piece of time.