All Comments on 'Hooded Whir'

a trip into, your poetry, thank you

Nasty and hardcore. That's fine as long as you can write nasty and hardcore and do it well.

Liked it alot.

Gaping lips barbed on entry

Heave to greet, undulate to shun.

Hysterical shrieks nailed in silk

Loved that bit.

Nice work.

Thanks.

~ J