All Comments on 'Hopeless romanticism on a train'

and rolls down the track in a wonderful tone with great imagery. nicely done liar.

and you can dance to it. Holding hands, dancing, etc. :) I could see a hundred different sequels, which is why you should never write one... Good job Liar.

for a minor eternity"

Bravo!

very touching..indeed romantic.

enjoyed this!

Some poems you can just feel--like this one.

*No longer using the thermometer.

I've never felt tired sighs better then the way you use them here. The longing to reach out is palpable. Very good work!

I have always loved trains, and this gorgeous love poem moves like one. Excellent imagery! Very well done!

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

I have always loved trains, and this gorgeous love poem moves like one. Excellent imagery! Very well done!

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)