by alecxavieredmond
These definitely got better as they went along. Enjoyed the build up.
Always look forward to your comments. You're a great motivator Leese
Why did you break it up? Not critical, just curious...
First of all, thanks for all your feedback. Now, to answer your question. Firstly I wanted to create a sense of suspense and tension. Secondly I was hoping to outdo myself with each installment. How'd I do?