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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice

One little thing:

"As our panting slows"

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
and then we rinse off in the pool

so...close...

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
well done descriptive poem

an active partner is always lovely

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