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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
interesting phrases

You have some interesting phrase in your poem:

to live with sand in the mouth

Petal-butterflies wither

without taking wing.

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I love adventures, especially those that have happy endings. I write, and I enjoy other people's stories.