All Comments on 'How you feel'

At first, I wondered if "shifty" was a typo... then I got it. I've tumbled through that desert more than once, always losing my way. Footprints in the sand only seems to work on beaches!

Thanks, Steve.

You were clearly in the zone when you wrote it; the flow is incredibly smooth. Everything shifts, yes? :)

I really like this...

So, how DO you hold

a hurricane in a cup,

lightning in a bottle,

a phantom wind,

a tsunami tamed?

Nice work. Thanks

has been mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

Glad Steve is back. Another strong poem from an excellent poet!

sums it up nicely.

Thank you

I love this poem. I wish my muse was as obliging.

Great work, steve.

{no therm.}

I resent the implication that camels are stupid....what does that make the rider.....other than that....wonderful poem...left me thirsty for more...thanks Steve.. ;)

*thermometer overheated in desert

...imagery. the one spot that really took my eyes in was this:

So, how DO you hold

a hurricane in a cup,

lightning in a bottle,

a phantom wind,

a tsunami tamed?

A mirage, though unreal,

still more than enough

to keep you searching

because you cannot help

how you feel.

overall this piece is very fluid......very nice......