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i can feel the emotion here even if i'm not quite sure what its about

; )

I cant say just why, but this really hit me this morning..like someone is being told, you screwed up, its my turn, go away...I really like this poem... good job laelia :)

the other two posters. I don't understand it all, but I

love it and I'm glad it wasn't me who screwed up. Men

can often screwup and never know why. Thats the way I read

this short wonderful work.

A two olive 'tini for the Gibson man (old C/W song).

I can see this one graphically displayed in the shape of a martini glass.

Clever words,

maybe too clever to be clear as gin??

or perhaps

a touch too much

vermouth

...use of the olive tree. The olive, the twist in the martini and then the olive branch of peace - not ready to be offered.

Clever work - a five.