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by pelegrino
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twelveoonealmost 10 years agoSuggest
Terza Rima, you have no problems with rhyme, would add to forcing reader, also. it appears to be too stream of conscious, too erudite. You may also want to try a more orderly interspersion of global, with personal.
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