All Comments on 'Hurry Back~'

fast as the road runner returns to eat... a pile o' seeds...

your erotic words heat up my house...hehehehe

Boy, someone needed some lovin'!

I hope you were fulfilled :-)

After a plea like this someone needs to reply urgently to tell Lildarlin that they WILL hurry back. Who could resist such a plea?

You don't think about what you write, you just churn out crap after crap. Stop worrying about how many submissions you have and take more time to actually think about what youre writing! Your poems are meaningless and weak!

You, sir, are a complete shit! I notice that you write under the pseudonym "Anonymous". I'm not surprised. No decent person would want to be associated with you. You are the kind of person who brings shame to Literotica. Why not tell us who you are? Probably the same one who delights in writing similar comments about my work. If you are, then let me tell you that I imediately deleted the comments on mine. I wish I could delete you.

I wish it were me you were thinking of when you wrote this!

of your predicament is very apparent....you get your point over well. (E-mail directions to.....)....;-)

funny evereyone else liked it...

must be a jealousy thing,

no balls huh anon?

if you were a good poet you could tell what makes it week and what could make it better...but mindless verbal lashings only show your limitations...<grin>

try more constructive criticism and a nicer way

of saying what you mean, or is it your nature?

ART~ (MY NAME PROUDLY WITH HONOR)

Great poem as always Lil!

I too would like to say how digusting I find it that someone has the disrespect to be so blatanly nasty as to leave such a vicous comment! This is a persons hardwork and talent you find so easily to slam! If you don't like it fair enough but to be so rude is not acceptable behaviour on Literotica and to not even have the courage to leave your name means that you are not only narrow minded but a COWARD!

Lildarling, Blushing(RED) This only happens in my dreams. Glad you could convert my dreams to words.

I love the way your words heat me up. What a gift...

Salivating

napkin ready

pulse a-racin'

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not though for the anon eunuch