All Comments on 'Hymn for the Stone Rings of Carnac'

It is beautifully written. If I wanted to nitpick (which I don't), I could find a few places to edit, a few things to change or emphasize to make it even stronger. Overall though the images are clear and arresting and the theme is consistent. It's an elegaic piece and I hope it gets the attention here that it deserves. :)

~ Angeline

and amazing imagry - you capture the sense of time moving forward and the shouting out at the universe of our small frail human bodies ... and yet, despite the implacable march of time and massive indifference of the universe, the stones stand, the human shout lingers ...

You could make this even tighter, and I encourage you to do so. It's an amazing poem, and deserves the best possible presentation.