All Comments on 'Hyper Schmyper!'

this is really a chuckle piece, until you read it deeply and realize how much effort really was needed for the poem, or was it? maybe you just have me fooled? even if you did its good, fun to read :)

If this is you struggling to find a form, Randi, I'm dying to see what you come up with when you find it. Fun to read and easy on the ear when read aloud.

No more themometer.

BT!!!

by far this is my favorite hypersonnet. I love the irreverence, and yet it is perfectly structured. This is a good form for you. Did you struggle at all? I really love how you had fun with it and made it feel so modern.

I wish I could goof off and do half this well! Thanks!