by lilnymph28
Nice play with words, great poem and subject matter, lol. Thanks.
and you were my lady....Now I understand where that song came from. Nice metamorphosis.
Most men are out of date and all thumbs. Find a master
cabinet maker and you'll have a fighting chance. This
is a good idea and visional you have here.
...offering from a new name. Sharp language and little waste. Impressive. Hoping there's more to come from you!
with some excellent, unique phrasing. A strong use of images throughout strengthens the poem. Very well done.