- Erotic Poetry
- I can love you...
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I can love you I can sing you
across the ocean across the most
impervious
uprising
concord
carnage
My blood begins
in your blood
But how high the precipice
that separates my lips from
your skin
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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cherries_on_snowalmost 18 years agoSmall, sharp, deadly good. A pirhannah of a poem. Thanks.
Bill Dadaover 18 years agoyou love like you write, you must have a long line of lovers waiting their turn.
ty,bd
minsuealmost 20 years agoI'd say I want to be you when I grow up, but you're younger than me so I've no excuse. ;)
ABSTRUSEalmost 20 years agoSigh is the best I can do, especially after following what Charley wrote.
Few words that speak volumes.
CharleyHalmost 20 years agoTwo poems, this and ?Tongues?, that stand apart from your others, simple in form, to the affecting point, explicit in imagery, speaking different emotional languages from different places on the same breath. On the surface of the words and beneath, both poems seem the most deeply felt I have read from you yet.
This one absolute in its shape: tender, direct, beautiful and poignant.
