- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I died for beauty
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I died for beauty,
To be seen.
Living a nightmare,
Thinking it a dream.
What is beauty,
That never let's go?
That plants the seed of doubt,
Which inside you does grow.
I died being empty,
Thinking I was full.
Pretending I was seen,
But being invisible.
- COMMENTS
Desejoover 11 years agoThere is a nice rhythm to this, and I sense there is a solid idea behind it.
It could be improved with some slight edits, for example in line six
I assume you mean lets, not let's (let us), and I don't think you need the "being" in "I died being empty" or the final line. Just my two cents.
