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Click hereI imagine your eyes,
how they dance when you laugh
the way your nose curls
and the dimple in your cheek.
I imagine your hair,
and how it must feel
to run my fingers through it
as you lay beside me.
I imagine your skin,
flawless and perfect
as you stand before me
naked and exposed.
I imagine your heart,
the way it whispers in my ear
as I lay on your chest
hearing its' rhythm.
I imagine your love,
how deep it could run
like a raging river
passionate and strong.
I imagine your soul,
so honest and true
you are my lover, my Master
one day I'll find you.
Kiten69, I really like how this speaks clearly and honestly of need and desire and hope. The first rule of good writing is to have something to say - and you do. The second rule is to say it as honestly as possible - and you have. Bravo for opening up for our enjoyment.
Something struck me with this poem. Wonderfully written and simply beautiful.
As sack said, difficult not to be cliched, but you avoided the trap.
Really enjoyed this.
Elle
not as cliche ridden as most poems on this topic. Could use a little tightening here and there, but a respectable first submission. Thanks for sharing this with Lit.!