Erotic PoetryI KnowI know
warm raindrops on my skin
make me want to dance,
the lion’s command
and the stretch of ageless mountains
can reach me where I stand.
I know home.
I know
the shattering of time
caused by the meeting of souls
can’t be stopped or controlled,
an inhalation so sublime
continually makes me whole.
I know joy.
I know
the promise in your eyes
is a silence I believe,
your bites and kisses I need
As proof of sighs, aches and desires.
whisper my name and I
will surrender
forever.
I know you.
I know love.
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This poem is beautiful.
I don't even know what to say, except that it is marvelously incredible.
You may claim not to be a poet, but the words speak for themselves.
Net Mooi
wow, that was just beautiful and emotional. i hope i know a love like that someday.
Thank You
Firstly: thanks for the votes and kind words.
Next: Shire, the poem is all yours for your future wedding, lol - I'll be there in spirit.
And, lastly: Yes, this poem was written to go with the story, "I Know What I'm Doing" - but also intended to work as a stand-alone. I'm no poet, but I am an emotional being and hope that, at the very least, that came through. Again, thank you.
Blessings,
AHmore...
i hope you dont mind
And I will give full credit but I want to read this with my wedding vows, not that I'm gettin married anytime soon lol. I shed a tear for its beauty.
Shire
Beautiful!
This fit into the story so perfectly. I imagine you wrote it specifically for that purpose? It could also stand alone, though....
Keep up the good work!
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