by DeniseNoe
the way you put this poem together and some of the words you have used are terrific. A pleasure it was to read. I hope you continue to post and perhaps pop into the poetry forum for a visit sometimes, we have fun in there ;)
Great piece of poetry. I very much enjoyed reading it -- fun and smart!
Hi denise
You make your words dance, just as the fat woman's butt dances as sge sits on top of her man
Gregory