All Comments on 'I Like Her, Fat Lady'

by DeniseNoe

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normal jeannormal jeanalmost 16 years ago
I like

the way you put this poem together and some of the words you have used are terrific. A pleasure it was to read. I hope you continue to post and perhaps pop into the poetry forum for a visit sometimes, we have fun in there ;)

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 16 years ago
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Great piece of poetry. I very much enjoyed reading it -- fun and smart!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Dancer

Hi denise

You make your words dance, just as the fat woman's butt dances as sge sits on top of her man

Gregory

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