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Others will probably give you a critique of your poem but I gave it a 5* because I very much identify with this particular poem. Maybe I will tell you why sometime.

You know you have love when you write on a plane that humbles the universe. How can you miss something when it is in you and all around everything that is? Your love is beyond the physical and confuses your mortality into a blend of finite thoughts that is in conflict with your spiritual being. When love saturates your soul there is no room for worry regret or remorse. The conflict is natural and confusing. The life of the body is brief the life of the love is not comprehended by a mortal mind. I hope your ache is relieved in knowing you are just a child and you are being after by the stars and the spirits that surround you. Try to let them in so they can awaken what is their sister. I wish you peace and tranquility but the LOVE is all there is in the final analysis and you are well endowed with it.